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When I see you I don't know what to say//the thing that sucks is that
it happens everyday//I don't want it to look like I'm trying to igonre
you//the fact is that I actually adore you//if I came up to you would
you want to conversate with me?//or deep down inside do you want to
stay away from me?//we message each other a lot as if we were friends//
but we never speak in person and that don't make any sense//the fact
is that I really want to be with you//but I know that your feelings
for him are still in you//even if you don't have feelings for me I
still want to be friends//just know that I'll always care for you even
after the world ends//

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